Today in English we have had a go at editing a WABOLL (What a bad one looks like) based on the story ‘Home Sweet Home’. We started off by TRACKing the story, editing basic punctuation, direct speech and possessive apostrophes. After this, we had a go at improving the current vocabulary and sentences that had been used and written to turn the WABOLL into a WAGOLL (What a good one looks like). Check out our edited version below…
