In English, we are currently reading the book ‘The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe’ from the Chronicles of Narnia. We are really enjoying it so far and can’t wait to read some more.
In our last lesson, we looked at a WABOLL (What a Bad One Looks Like) of a setting description that was related to the book. We looked at all of their punctuation mistakes and whether we could make any changes to the language/vocabulary. We knew we could do better ourselves so we then re-wrote the setting description using all the techniques we have been learning about.
We worked in groups to make the changes and rewrite the paragraph – have a look!
